| Title: Exposed
| 27 Aug 2015 6:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Eso estuvo en realidad muy cerca,
en fin.
genial........
Can't wait for the next installment! Things are going a little too well, though. I have a feeling things will get complicated soon...
Is Harry going to be sick? I hope so.
This fear of the ocean thing is new and mysterious, but the most interesting part was the possibility for conflict here.
| Title: Exposed
| 26 Aug 2015 3:26 am
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| Reviewer: NuthatchXi (Anonymous)
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I really like the promise of tension in this chapter! Food poisoning? Along with an already on edge Petunia? Oh, boy. Excellent!
*groans* Harry what if you get food poisoning?
| Title: Exposed
| 25 Aug 2015 10:57 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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I was 'oh-no'ing about Petunia at the grocery until I read the bit about the prawns at the end. I've long gone off prawns personally for having a bad batch so I drastically hope that's not where Harry's headed!
I was wondering when the Dursleys would notice that Harry wasn't being tortured by Snape. Petunia may not let Snape's explation go though if she changes things, they won't get the money from Severus anymore. That might make her give it some thought.
| Title: Exposed
| 25 Aug 2015 4:52 pm
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| Reviewer: LylJJ (Anonymous)
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Love your story! I so like the water exposure therapy ....
Thank you Great chapter!
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