I just wanted to correct Viet Nam as Vietnam, but, I love how the story progresses, learning about Severus and his travels. Especially how Severus helped Muggles who seemed lost in their journeys.
I have to wonder what exactly Lily told Severus about Petunia?
| Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday
| 29 Aug 2015 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the description of Severus' summers very inventive
I always enjoy reading the teachers' point of views. They sound as happy as the students to be set free for the summer. My father was a teacher and he always felt that way. I especially liked getting Severus' feelings and what he had been doing for the past summers. He won't be a happy Snape when he has to go look in on Harry.
| Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday
| 21 Aug 2015 1:13 pm
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic! Please update soon :-)
Author's Response: Absolutely... right now, in fact :-)
A creative angle for a common childhood illness.
Author's Response: Well, illnesses are my area of expertise...
Es una idea muy interesante para un finc, sin dudad
Author's Response: Gracias!
| Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday
| 20 Aug 2015 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I enjoyed reading this very much.
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday
| 20 Aug 2015 7:02 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Really like this so far - so many good ideas. Hope there's quite a bit more to come.
Author's Response: There are about ten chapter, just got started and I'm glad you liked it.
| Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday
| 20 Aug 2015 6:41 pm
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| Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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:). love it. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Great! Coming very soon.
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