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Reviews For Surgery
Gracias por arreglar la relación de Severus y Harry, muchas gracias Es un hermoso capítulo, muy bien escrito, No puedo creer la audacia de Vernon Pero realmente esperó el siguiente capítulo
Author's Response: I agree. I think that Petunia will have great difficulties to change and I also believe that the way she treats Dudley is primarily selfish. In the books I seem to recall that she does make an effort to put him on a diet, doesn't she (making Harry follow the same regime)? It's an interesting question, though, whether parents who are incapable of restricting their children's food intake are to be considered abusive. On the one hand extreme overweight is a considerable health risk - you could argue that the children's health and life are in danger. On the other hand, at least in my country, I don't think that it has ever happened that a child has been removed from their guardians on those grounds. Maybe it occurs in other countries?
Sin duda me impresiona que Vernon este en la madriguera. Me encanta como has ido construyendo el personaje de Molly, su manipulación y envidia sobre el papel de Severus en la vida de Harry Yo realmente esperó que Severus y Harry puedan volver a conectar pronto
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews! I guess Mr Weasley didn't want to invite Snape without Harry's permission. Also I had this mind - see chapter 11 :-)
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