| Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday
| 29 Aug 2015 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the description of Severus' summers very inventive
| Title: Chapter 1 A persistent stomach ache
| 29 Aug 2015 9:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very unusual start thank you so much
| Title: Chapter 10 Entreaties and suspicions
| 29 Aug 2015 6:20 pm
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| Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
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Ok, that was a great chapter and an even greater cliffhanger. I'm so incredibly curious about the appearance of Vernon.
You nailed the exhaustion one feels when trying to keep up masks, especially when not knowing how one is supposed to react "normally". Harry's survival in the past was dependent upon knowing the correct reaction to show in any given circumstance. I can only imagine the stress he must feel right now.
I love how perceptive Harry is when reading Mrs Weasley. But there is that survival instinct again.
Author's Response: Thanks! I agree perfectly with your analysis of Harry and that it has to do with survival instincts.
| Title: Chapter 10 Entreaties and suspicions
| 29 Aug 2015 6:20 pm
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| Reviewer: karisma (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 10 Entreaties and suspicions
| 29 Aug 2015 6:20 pm
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| Reviewer: karisma (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 9 Protective instincts
| 29 Aug 2015 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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*groans* God, really not a good time to let your temper flare Sev. Bill needs to learn to take directions, I'm sure Molly will be thrilled to have Harry all to herself though.
| Title: Chapter 9 Protective instincts
| 28 Aug 2015 9:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 9 Protective instincts
| 28 Aug 2015 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic:-) ! Can't wait for more!
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