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Title: Chapter 9 Protective instincts 28 Aug 2015 7:09 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL, well the honeymoon couldn't last forever now could it?
Title: Chapter 9 Protective instincts 28 Aug 2015 6:50 pm
Reviewer: Orange_Panda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woah! Look at Snape...he's crazy overprotective!poor harry
    although the ending made me feel sorry for snape...I mean ouch that gotta hurt
Title: Chapter 8 The magical bond 28 Aug 2015 4:48 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting backstory.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it was kind of fun to make it up :) Pseudoscience...
Title: Chapter 8 The magical bond 28 Aug 2015 3:56 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a happy Molly. I get the feeling Arthur may be more understanding. Dumbledore seems... Condescending? Relieved that Sev "doesn't" have a "strong" pull. It makes me suspicious.

    Author's Response: You got it right there, at least about Molly and Arthur. With Dumbledore - it's more complicated...
Title: Chapter 8 The magical bond 28 Aug 2015 12:08 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Me encanta lo que estas haciendo, es sencillamente genial

    Amo como Severus se esta involucrando en la vida de Harry, y la resistencia de Molly aƱade un factor sumamente atractivo

    Gracias por actualizar

    Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it! I enjoyed making up the whole thing about the appendicitis rite magic. We're going to see more of Snape's involvment and protetive tendencies in the next chapter :-)
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 27 Aug 2015 3:36 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised that Snape is so squeamish. As a potions master, he had to prepare all kinds of disgusting things so I would think the surgery and what it involves would not affect him so much.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the reviews! If you read the next chapter, Snape’s ”squeamishness” will be at least partly addressed. Yes, he handles potions ingredients, but we do not know if he particularly enjoys it, do we? And in my experience there is a huge difference between cutting the entrails of a dead animal, and cutting in a live human being… People are different in that aspect - some absolutely shun the idea and become nauseous, others find it fascinating, and in my experience the squeamish ones are not always the ones you would guess from the start…

Title: Chapter 3 Thirst 27 Aug 2015 3:19 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was glad to see that Vernon and Dudley both were concerned about Harry. They both seem cowed by Petunia though. I wonder if Petunia actually took Harry to the hospital? The appendix thing was interesting. I would think that the magical community would just have the appendix removed from their children automatically if not getting appendicitis can impede magic.
Title: Chapter 2 Teachers on holiday 27 Aug 2015 2:44 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I always enjoy reading the teachers' point of views. They sound as happy as the students to be set free for the summer. My father was a teacher and he always felt that way. I especially liked getting Severus' feelings and what he had been doing for the past summers. He won't be a happy Snape when he has to go look in on Harry.
Title: Chapter 7 The Burrow, Ottery St Catchpole 27 Aug 2015 1:52 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!!!

    Me encanta esta historia, es realmente muy buena la idea que estas manejando,

    muy fascinante!!

    Wow!!!
Title: Chapter 1 A persistent stomach ache 26 Aug 2015 11:48 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry must really be in a bad way for Petunia to allow him to write to his 'freaky friends.' I found your characterization of Vernon to be interesting. Usually he is shown as the real bad guy. Too bad he wasn't able to stick to his guns and call Petunia's bluff.

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