Awwww. Poor Sev. I don't like spiders, either. I'm glad that Joseph was able to figure out what happened and straighten everybody out on the details, though. I want Severus to be a part of little Harry's life - it could be so cute, if only he'd give himself a chance to like the kid.
I felt the spider incident was really well done. I especially liked the way both Harry and Severus' points of view were shown. With his background, it must have been like a slap in the face to realize that he had acted like his own father. Harry's apology should help to show him that Harry isn't James. Nice job.
| Title: What Dumbledore had to say
| 04 Sep 2015 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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I love it :-) ! So well written and such a long chapter, it is a pleasure to read! Can't wait for more!
| Title: What Dumbledore had to say
| 03 Sep 2015 7:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So why will the smile haunt Sev?
Joseph sounds like a great parent. Understanding, patient and non-judgmental.
Awwww!!
Que dulce capítulo, realmente ha sido muy bueno, brillante.........
| Title: What Dumbledore had to say
| 01 Sep 2015 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous)
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Ookay..dumbledore has gone nuts lmao... Awww... Harry apologized! Snape apologized too!! Awwww... Beautiful chapter... and the last sentence just melted me right on the spot!! XD
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