Title: A Brief Appearance of the Doe
| 06 Sep 2015 9:44 pm
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Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Had Rowling explored Snape's character a bit more, this wouldn't have been a bit ooc for Snape. His memories were evident of that in the final book. Anyway, looking forward to more, though I'm sure I won't be the only one irritated if Joseph dies anytime soon. Keep up the good work!
Title: A Brief Appearance of the Doe
| 06 Sep 2015 8:29 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely thank you. I love the scene of Severus telling bedtime stories, so cute!
I think you did well with Severus. Gramps is just someone Severus's respects and has fond memories of. No way he can refuse him and his Green eyes :-)
I liked your Severus. He would probably be less snarky with Joseph Evans since he knew the man most of his life. The Evans sounded like they took on the roles of foster parents for Severus when he was young. Severus has gotten to know Harry more and sees him as more like Lily than James so he is going to be more patient. I hope Joseph is all right. He is a neat character.
Title: A Brief Appearance of the Doe
| 06 Sep 2015 3:22 pm
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Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Love this story so far. Harry is adorable - so eager, energetic and happy, while Snape is believable too - finding it hard to deal with being wanted after years of being alone and closed off. Hope Joseph makes it though.
I felt the spider incident was really well done. I especially liked the way both Harry and Severus' points of view were shown. With his background, it must have been like a slap in the face to realize that he had acted like his own father. Harry's apology should help to show him that Harry isn't James. Nice job.
Title: A Brief Appearance of the Doe
| 06 Sep 2015 7:48 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Good part. I loved the baking cookies scene! Too funny!
I was wondering about Joseph's age. He is 72. Harry is 5 and Lily was 20 when Harry was born, so Joseph was 47 was Lily was born. Is that correct?
Title: What Dumbledore had to say
| 04 Sep 2015 6:52 pm
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Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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I love it :-) ! So well written and such a long chapter, it is a pleasure to read! Can't wait for more!
Title: What Dumbledore had to say
| 03 Sep 2015 7:15 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: How Things Came About
| 02 Sep 2015 10:13 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written and constructed thank you
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