| Title: The Memories We Bare
| 06 Sep 2015 4:03 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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You made a good job of achieving the feel you were after for the story. Nice work.
Aw, poor Harry. Glad though that Snape got him away.
I loved the way that Snape found out that Harry was his son.
Would love to read more about their lives together, maybe some day.
| Title: The Memories We Bare
| 05 Sep 2015 6:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very well thought out story
This was an especially fresh and creative piece to read! I like how you used Tobias and the way Harry reacted to being kept against his will.... By the way, I love all the banners for your stories, they're gorgeous
This was an especially fresh and creative piece to read! I like how you used Tobias and the way Harry reacted to being kept against his will.... By the way, I love all the banners for your stories, they're gorgeous
I do like your take on this challenge. The way you portrayed Tobias' manipulation of Harry and how the Stockholm's set in seemed rather well depicted to me. The ending did feel a bit rushed, perhaps, but I understand why you elected to wrap it up in such a way.
All in all, well done. An enjoyable read!
This was unexpected but very good. Thank you for writing the story and sharing it.
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