| Title: The Deal
| 05 Mar 2016 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting and a new take on "Severus adopts Harry" thank you
I can't imagine that Snape would turn down that deal. The only problem Harry might have is getting him to leave the castle and all the treasures in the Chamber.
This was very good, I like the Slytherinness
Thank you for writing this. It's very clever. I would love to read the other stories that you mentioned.
| Title: The Deal
| 21 Sep 2015 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh please tell me you will make a sequil please please please
Your premise is excellent, grammar appalling. Perhaps try and get a beta to help.
Author's Response: Sorry about the grammar problems. I had thought to write this in the present tense, but after the first paragraph I drifted into the past tense. A couple of reviewers on ff.net pointed this out, and I tried to fix it here. But somehow, the earlier version got posted. This is what I meant by learning about posting. I'm also having computer issues in which dreadful typing problems pop up spontaneously.
Thanks for the input. I'll try to do a better job of proofreading in the future.
| Title: The Deal
| 18 Sep 2015 7:55 am
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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Hehe, Slytherin Harry =D
I would really like to read some sequel! =o)
I look forward to the one shots!
I enjoyed it. I'd love to see more from this.
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