| Title: Bat of the Dungeons
| 26 Sep 2015 2:12 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Oh this was a shocker, Mr Lovegood is dead. This was an unexpected twist. I hope things work out well for the twins. Will Harry find out who his parents were? I look forward to the next chapter.
Poor Harry and Luna.
Author's Response: At least they have each other.
You are evil. I know I have stated as much to you, but my point still stands.
Poor Harry and Luna - first their mum, now their father. And that stupid Quirrel skulking around, now. *shakes head* Interesting that you have Snape aware of Harry's true identity. A good touch, I feel.
Good chapter - look forward to the next.
What an original idea. Completely fitting the Lovegood theme! I can't wait to read more of it.
I like that both Harry and Luna can see the beasties... So, does Harry really not know who he is? The hat knows...
I hope they don't get away with it.
I wonder what happened to the necklace.
Author's Response: No good, stuck up Ravenclaws is what happened to it. In the books her housemates hid her things from her so I figured that would just start earlier on in my story. Poor Luna.
| Title: The Twins, Lovegood
| 24 Sep 2015 12:35 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I like this. You have captured both Luna's and Harry's personalities very well. I wonder where Snape will fit in....
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