The greatest thing about this story is its bittersweet moments and the storyline. Most of the characters also weren't that far from their original personality, which makes it more well-written. I give this story a 9 since its impossible to be completely perfect!
I really like this story. It is well written and a very nice Christmas story. You have unintentionally provided me with advice that I need very much right now; about no longer being a victim. I like Harry in this story, need to break my silence. thank you for sharing this story and empowering me to make a change!
Awww...! Snape being sweet--in a very Slytherin way. =} Very well done. The Slytherins embodied their House (at least as I see it); characters had flaws that weren't blown out of proportion to ridiculous levels; and "fixing" the friendships wasn't too "magically" easy to be believed--and everybody felt in-character. I can't wait for your next story!
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