Thanks for a good read. It was rather nice to see a different side to the Slytherins.
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| 19 Dec 2015 5:46 pm
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| Reviewer: LadyK1995 (Anonymous)
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Don't change anything! This story is absolutely perfect. You told it beautifully and it seriously made me cry. Well Done!
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| 19 Dec 2015 1:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it although I think you and Harry were a little too easy on Ron and the Gryffindors! Thank you so much
I like how it ended, and would now like to read a story in which Snape somehow ends up becoming Santa Claus...but, I digress. I do like the idea of Harry standing up for himself, and of helping to bridge gaps between the houses. The contract at the end worked well, because of Harry's trust issues; kids who've been let down so much need something more binding than people's word that something will happen, because people cannot be taken at their word. Nicely done.
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| 19 Dec 2015 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Fascinating story! I love the deliberately-paced plot, and the fact that Harry's transition into Slytherin territory feels natural. The Christmas room is a great concept, and the silent interplay between Draco and Harry is cool to watch, especially from Snape's point of view. Glad things seem to be working out with Gryffindor in the end!
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| 19 Dec 2015 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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The emotions you get from listening to Harrys story are overwhelming, loved the story
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| 18 Dec 2015 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Anonymous)
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You really captured the gryffindor impulsiveness well
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| 18 Dec 2015 8:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Awesome !!! And I am always happy to See more from you:)
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