Awww...! Snape being sweet--in a very Slytherin way. =} Very well done. The Slytherins embodied their House (at least as I see it); characters had flaws that weren't blown out of proportion to ridiculous levels; and "fixing" the friendships wasn't too "magically" easy to be believed--and everybody felt in-character. I can't wait for your next story!
This story brought tears to my eyes. A sweet fantasy.
This story brought tears to my eyes. A sweet fantasy.
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| 21 Dec 2015 3:05 pm
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Would love to see a sequal to this story and also see Harry confront Sirius.
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| 21 Dec 2015 3:35 am
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I've read this twice now and I absolutely love it. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story. I want it to keep going, but I know sometimes that's not possible. But if you decide to add another chapter, I'll be more than happy to read it again! =)
Fantastic story! I think it's one of my fav. I love your Christmas stories. Love the interaction between Harry and Draco throughout, especially in the beginning when they were in the 'loser room'. Snape is great too.
I liked the end. Though I never would have thought of Snape as Santa Claus. The Slytherins' reaction to Harry's situation was neat - I think that was my favorite part of the story.
Good for Harry and the Slytherins. At least they stuck up for Harry even if the Gryffindors wouldn't.
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| 19 Dec 2015 8:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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I liked the story very much :)
And I like the way, the problems have been solved... It's great that you rebuilt the bridge between Ron and Harry, without breaking the friendship with Slytherins.
And I really like the vision of Severus being Santa :)))
Thanks for a good read. It was rather nice to see a different side to the Slytherins.
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