| Title: Santa's Offer
| 19 Dec 2015 5:46 pm
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| Reviewer: LadyK1995 (Anonymous)
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Don't change anything! This story is absolutely perfect. You told it beautifully and it seriously made me cry. Well Done!
| Title: Santa's Offer
| 19 Dec 2015 1:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it although I think you and Harry were a little too easy on Ron and the Gryffindors! Thank you so much
| Title: Draco's Gift
| 19 Dec 2015 1:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the way you portrayed the Slytherins! JKR was always too hard on them I thought. Great chapter thank you
| Title: Christmas Day
| 19 Dec 2015 1:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this it was so sad but with a lovely ending, thank you so much and I'm looking forward to reading the next two parts!
I like how it ended, and would now like to read a story in which Snape somehow ends up becoming Santa Claus...but, I digress. I do like the idea of Harry standing up for himself, and of helping to bridge gaps between the houses. The contract at the end worked well, because of Harry's trust issues; kids who've been let down so much need something more binding than people's word that something will happen, because people cannot be taken at their word. Nicely done.
This was a lovely addition to the initial chapter. I'm glad that you chose to add it. I like the idea of Harry being brought into the Slytherin fold, and being befriended by them.
I enjoyed this, and like how Draco and Harry got along for the holidays. Snape playing Santa worked well, and he wasn't out of character at it either. This was fun to read.
I like your Severus. He takes his duties as Head of House seriously. I also thought you did a good job with the speech patterns of Snape and Harry. Snape usually speaks so formally and a lot of writers don't think to follow that pattern. It was surprising to see Harry and Draco getting along so well but, after all, it is Christmas.
| Title: Santa's Offer
| 19 Dec 2015 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Fascinating story! I love the deliberately-paced plot, and the fact that Harry's transition into Slytherin territory feels natural. The Christmas room is a great concept, and the silent interplay between Draco and Harry is cool to watch, especially from Snape's point of view. Glad things seem to be working out with Gryffindor in the end!
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