Excellent chapter. I like how Snape, though he was upset with Harry's question, did not take it out on Harry, though it was obvious that he was upset in how he handled the dishes. That added detail made the scene seem that much more real to life. I am looking forward to seeing more of how their relationship develops over time. It's nice to see Harry thinking more about Snape at the end, and the complications for the man who has adopted him. The concern is a nice touch.
| Title: With Sympathies
| 22 Feb 2016 9:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter I do like how you are portraying Severus, thank you
Can't wait for your next update! :) Thanks for sharing this story with us, I'm so excited to read about the Dursley's and what will happen if Fudge comes around.
| Title: Slightly Less Strangers
| 22 Feb 2016 10:23 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Way to stick your foot in your mouth, harry, lol. :)
| Title: Rules of the Masquerade
| 22 Feb 2016 10:05 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Ahhhhhhh! I can not wait for Snape to meet the Dursley's, you are exceeding my expectations, so I am very chipper, it's 5am here, and I can't go to sleep because I'm too caught up in this story!
This is awesome! I love the plot, how Harry is acting rather mature for the circumstances and that Snape is not being a complete prat about it, so exciting!
Simply awesome! Love how Harry didn't get all childish and upset that Snape was trying to drag him off, he complied like an actual thinking human, unlike how a lot of other stories write him. Thanks so much for sharing!
| Title: With Sympathies
| 21 Feb 2016 6:59 am
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| Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous)
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Thank for the update! Another geest chapter!
| Title: With Sympathies
| 21 Feb 2016 4:17 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Now for Sirius to find out ...
I'm glad Harry is concerned about Voldemort's reaction.
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