| Title: Cooking Up
| 25 Jan 2016 8:28 pm
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| Reviewer: nnjjj (Anonymous)
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This story is so great! I had to leave a review. I meant to do it sooner but for some reason it would not let me leave one from the phone.
This really is excellent work. It is a well-written story and the characters and their development is solid. It has been very consistent so far and I hope you keep it that way. I love that you are making them work for their relationship and that things take time to develop. I am so glad you leave in the angst and emotion. It makes it more realistic. I especially enjoyed their conversation in the previous chapter about expectations and what to call each other.
I'm so excited to see what Harry ends up doing. It could really go both ways...not tell and it ends up causing trouble further down the road when the truth is discovered, or tell and some heavy angst/drama/emotion along with that. Either way, please don't rush it and make them "best friends" immediately.
Thanks for sharing your time! Keep up the amazing work.
| Title: Cooking Up
| 25 Jan 2016 8:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter! Hmm I wonder they can share memories in a pensieve to help them learn about each others history before the ministry comes knocking. Thanks for sharing! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Wow!!!
Nos acercamos más a un punto de confianza entre los dos, bueno, luego de mucho trauma.....
Jejeje
Gracias por actualizar tan pronto!!!!
| Title: Cooking Up
| 24 Jan 2016 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great discussion, and I enjoyed them making dinner together.
| Title: Cooking Up
| 24 Jan 2016 8:24 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Good update. I hope Harry is smart enough to tell Snape the truth about his childhood.
It will be embarrassing but I think Harry needs to tell Snape the truth. Not that he will believe it but it's better than lying and being found out later.
I wouldn't want to tell someone that either.
| Title: Cooking Up
| 24 Jan 2016 3:27 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Loved the details, like the dancing reindeer!
| Title: Cooking Up
| 24 Jan 2016 2:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous)
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I absolutely love this story but what a cliff hanger! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Oh gosh that is such a dilemma! I hope Harry decides to tell Snape as it'll just cause so many other complications if he lies!
Can't wait for the next update :)
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