Thanks for the great read. This was really nicely done.
This was a great chapter. I love seeing the progression of Harry’s life through these snapshots in time.
Nice opening chapter. I like how proactive Harry is being.
So good to read this again.
Ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga ga!! I loved it, a new concept really, though there was no character development. I liked it, want more, but guess that is impossible? Anyway, thanks for sharing this story!
okay..... Many things left unsaid, many gaps, but looks good. You still had Severus kill Dumbledore? Guess that's okay? No, it's not, but we will have to see it.
To big a time skip, what happened at the duelling club? The polyjuice potion?
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