| Title: Year 3-6
| 05 Mar 2016 6:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Jenifer (Anonymous)
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Hi. Really like your story but it would work better in the past tense. Present tense makes for yucky reading. But your concept is good!
I'm glad seventh year will have its own chapter. There is a lot for Harry to do. And he will have to find out what Severus' role was and why he killed Dumbledore.
A little more quicker than I expected, but heck I'm hooked! Can't wait for seventh year
Oh, Merlin, I *love* the twist! Poor Severus...! You could actually end it like this...no, no; forget I said that--MORE! MORE!! >=D
Author's Response: It was originally supposed to be a oneshot, but my brain had a similar reaction. Next chapter coming soon :)
| Title: Year 2
| 25 Feb 2016 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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This shouldn't be an amusing story but your matter of fact Harry is irresistible! Thank you so much!
What a horrifying, yet delightedly fun, idea! Thanks so much.
This is great, I hope you continue!
This took two readthroughs but I'm easily confused. I like it! It's very different and I'm curious to see what you'll do with it!
Oh I love it. I love it so much. Oh my god what are words. It's so terribly heartbreaking but SO good. I love how James and Lily get so mad at him for dying and Snape is just ??????
“But sometimes, when I really want to see them, I try to make Uncle Vernon extra mad so he’ll send me to them again. Of course, if I don’t get him angry enough then it just hurts more; I hate it when that happens...”
That line gave me chills.
Poor Snape, to mention it. This poor guy can't catch a break.
Update soon, I hope! I'd LOVE to see where this goes.
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