I love the twists you added with the other son Kieran being spoiled and Harry being abused, Kieran looking a little like snape and Harry being much closer, but then Snape not giving a care in the world for Harry, a son he had with the woman he loved just over a grudge! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :) Yes Snape is being a little unreasonable right now, but it's hard to let go of hatred quickly. I promise it will get better for Harry eventually.
Congrats on your first fic! I'm excited to read it, and loved all the drama and emotions you put into it so far
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