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Reviews For The Unwanted One
I love how the Twins protected their shop and Harry came to the rescue. I wonder what Voldemort was doing there, if it was just a coincidence or if Voldemort was looking for Harry or Severus. Great chapter! Thanks so much for the update! I am loving this story and am so happy when there is a new chapter to read. Thanks for sharing your story! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I was a little worried about the action scenes not being good enough, but I'm happy with how they turned out. It wouldn't be Harry if he didn't always come to the rescue. We'll have to wait and see what happens next with that spell! Plus Kieran and his mother are going to be back next chapter. Severus is going to have his hands full. Lol. Thanks for reviewing! :)
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Author's Response: Well it's basically due to Harry being used to getting little and is just grateful for anything really. He doesn't want to be of any trouble. I think once he gets around the idea that he isn't a burden, he'll open up more. It's a slow process that Severus will have to work through. If they were going to take a trip to London, it will be a while before they do. Hmm you'll have to wait and see if Severus gets to Harry in time.
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Author's Response: I had to the put that owl bit in there lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing! :)
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