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Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! I am so worried about that unknown spell that went to Harry. Maybe they can use a pensive to hear the Latin Voldemort used to figure out what it was. I love how protective Snape is towards Harry now. I bet Kieran and his mother are going to have a huge case of jealousy over Snape's care for Harry.

    I love how the Twins protected their shop and Harry came to the rescue. I wonder what Voldemort was doing there, if it was just a coincidence or if Voldemort was looking for Harry or Severus.

    Great chapter! Thanks so much for the update! I am loving this story and am so happy when there is a new chapter to read. Thanks for sharing your story! Please update when you can!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

    I was a little worried about the action scenes not being good enough, but I'm happy with how they turned out. It wouldn't be Harry if he didn't always come to the rescue.

    We'll have to wait and see what happens next with that spell! Plus Kieran and his mother are going to be back next chapter. Severus is going to have his hands full. Lol.

    Thanks for reviewing! :)

Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 6:53 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely written battle scene.

    Author's Response: Thanks you! :)
Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 4:38 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I wasn't expecting that.
Title: A Test of Strength 31 May 2016 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely action scene with a beautiful cliffie ending

    Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it! :)
Title: The Little Things 15 May 2016 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending thank you so much for updating

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: The Little Things 13 May 2016 8:42 pm
Reviewer: mandancie (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely loved this chapter. :D I so can't wait to see what will happen next. :D I love the relationship that is developing between Severus and Harry. Update as soon as you can. {sorry for the late review, I seem to not be able to get an alert when you update.}

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Title: The Little Things 13 May 2016 3:24 am
Reviewer: Dark Inu Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    Welp, that's the last we see of Clarice in even a remotely positive light. Now we know where the boy got his opinion from. At least the boy was distracted by his mother the majority of the trip, so that Severus could take care of Harry (as much as Harry would allow). Oh, I hope that he used those spy skills and bought the book that Harry was looking through. It's the first bit of actual independant personality/opinion that he's actually shown. Ah, I know what it feels like, being pushed to the back of the group like that. It may not be intentional (on Severus' part, at least), but things like that happen. Still, at trip to London? Even if it's just a Harry-Severus thing, it could be a lot of teeth-pulling at this point, trying to get Harry to surrender an actual opinion. Like the clothing: not a single peep out of him. Heck, there could be a hot pink t-shirt with the words 'Snakes are where it's at' in glitter and Harry would say nothing about it. Sure, the thing might not ever leave the bottom of his drawer, but Harry wouldn't say anything about it. I just hope that Severus is able to find/save Harry before the Polyjuice wears off... Or, maybe, the simplest disguises are the best...? *hopeful cringe*

    Author's Response: Well it's basically due to Harry being used to getting little and is just grateful for anything really. He doesn't want to be of any trouble. I think once he gets around the idea that he isn't a burden, he'll open up more. It's a slow process that Severus will have to work through. If they were going to take a trip to London, it will be a while before they do. Hmm you'll have to wait and see if Severus gets to Harry in time.
Title: The Little Things 12 May 2016 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Title: The Little Things 12 May 2016 12:59 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome cliffhanger!!! And a lovely, detailed chapter throughout! (I loved the owl biting Kieran--he totally deserved it!!! :D ) Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I had to the put that owl bit in there lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: The Little Things 12 May 2016 8:06 am
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Again a fantastic chapter :)! Thank you for the update, can ' t wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

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