Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 4 20 Jun 2020 2:01 pm
Reviewer: marzipan77 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, she's not changed. No surprise there. I do with Harry would get well and begin to stand on his own. Whatever this weird spell is that makes him pass out can't be treated at all? Sad to see him like this.
Title: Chapter 4 05 Jul 2016 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    You are very IC with her character thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 4 27 Jun 2016 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    You write Petunia perfectly. That whole scene... I could see it happening. Kudos. Really awesome job

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Title: Chapter 4 27 Jun 2016 12:07 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so well written. I cannot get enough! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 4 27 Jun 2016 12:07 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so well written. I cannot get enough! :)
Title: Chapter 4 26 Jun 2016 9:58 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like the old adage about the road to hell being paved with good intentions was correct in this case. Madam Pomfrey messed up big time. This can't have done Harry any good. One note, I noticed you wrote 'taught with anger' and used taught earlier in the chapter. The word you want is taut. Pronounced the same way but spelled differently and it means tight or to tighten.

    Author's Response: Rectified. Thanks a lot!

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