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Title: The Ghosts in the Park 17 Aug 2016 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Dezra (Signed) [Report This]
    Should have been longer.
Title: The Ghosts in the Park 14 Jul 2016 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the story and of course a sequel would be most welcome!
Title: The Ghosts in the Park 13 Jul 2016 2:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a neat story. I hope you would decide to do a follow up at some time. Since Severus had been mourning Harry for so long, his perception of him is completely different from canon and would make an interesting story.

    Author's Response: Thanks. We'll see about the follow-up. I tried a few times to make it a short story, but the characters kept misbehaving. One in particular kept trying to be a complete and total jerk when I didn't want them to be. If I can figure out how to keep that character in line, we might have something.
Title: The Ghosts in the Park 12 Jul 2016 2:51 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked this rather original take Severus' life without a Harry to sort of 'guard'. It got really gruesome there for a moment with the 'dead' Harry, did something happen to the Dursley's? Prison? I wonder how they determined that it was the relatives fault that he died. I feel I missed something about that. Very nice fic, :) Thanks for sharing! I hope to see more when you have the time to write it.

    Author's Response: Hopefully the gruesome wasn't too offputting. I was considering raising the rating just for that bit. As for what happened...well there's a lot to that and I don't want to let out too many spoilers in case I decide to continue. I will say that the Dursley's are not in prison. There wasn't enough evidence to tie them to the body.
Title: The Ghosts in the Park 12 Jul 2016 2:43 am
Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) I enjoyed this. Thanks for writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a note! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: The Ghosts in the Park 12 Jul 2016 12:25 am
Reviewer: tess4aria (Signed) [Report This]
    This is fabulous. Satisfying enough that I like it as a one-shot, though I want more.
    If you get around to it, I'll be one reader!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Gotta finish the other first, though. I can't trust myself with two plotlines at the same time using the same characters. They tend to merge in my head.
Title: The Ghosts in the Park 11 Jul 2016 8:06 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. I nearly didn't read it from the summary, but I'm very glad I did. Nice contrast between Snape's mood at the beginning and end of the story. Yes, there's plenty of room for you to write more if the mood takes you, but it stands well enough as a one shot, just needing the reader to use a bit of imagination.

    Author's Response: I probably wouldn't read it with that summary either...perhaps I should revise it. :D

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