Harry’s mature understanding and Severus’s acceptance are very moving.
The pain that those two have gone through. I'm just glad that they can actually get to know each other behind their respective public masks. Though, Draco may be a bit of a challenge to work around. He, after all, is used to being an only child and Harry, unfortunately, is the younger brother intruder in this situation. And younger siblings just almost always seem to need more attention than is 'acceptable', according to the older sibling(s).
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| Title: Chapter 2
| 28 Jul 2016 7:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lump in the throat time! Loved the chapter all the characters well rounded and believable thank you so much
Awwww.... I'm in love with these 2 boys! Great chapter!
Tears and smiles for this beauty of a chapter! Love your sequel!
I love this chapter so much!! It's messing with my heart lol
Such a good chapter, and nice to see Severus less sure of himself than usual. Harry is certainly no longer a child, but still needs his father, so I'm hoping there is a happy outcome for them. You did a good job with Draco too. Only one more chapter? I hope its a long one!
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