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Title: Chapter 2 29 Aug 2016 6:40 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved their conversation it had the right amount of the old and new Severus and he was so supportive of Harry. Thank you so much

    Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 2 17 Aug 2016 9:33 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving it! Poor Harry, he's such a mess, but Severus is right, it's not hopeless. I love seeing Snape in such an insightful reflection of himself, also understanding, and encouraging Harry. Harry really needs it.

    The descriptions of the artist and the gallery meeting were great. I love that Snape can handle small talk now and that Harry can be into something so completely as painting. I wonder if Harry is bleeding painful magic into his paintings, and if that is the way it is healing him. Or if it's just a way for him to express himself and work through his emotions. I think it's wonderful for him to of picked up a painting hobby. Maybe he'll get really good and just be an artist as his occupation. Though I'm not sure who would appreciate the awfulness of the emotions he surely paints, I can't see it as a dining room attraction. :)

    I'm curious to find out! Thanks so much for the update!

    Author's Response:

    You’re right! What a horror to have a painting like that at one’s home! Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 2 16 Aug 2016 1:30 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry can build up his confidence. At least he has Snape to confide in. I wonder if something happened with Ron or Ginny that Bill is calling Severus? Looking forward to finding out. I noticed that when Snape saw Bill, you stated that 'he blemished.' I believe the word you wanted may be blanched (to go white). A blemish is an imperfection.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I had completely misunderstood the meaning of ”to blemish” - and was sure enough not to look it up, too! I must have seen it used that way somewhere else, so I’ll blame it on the fact that I read far too much fanfiction - apparently it’s not healthy for your vocabulary :-) Luckily there are people like you to rectify it!

    Bill’s appearance in Snape’s floo is not about Ron or Ginny, though…

Title: Chapter 2 15 Aug 2016 6:42 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Very unusual and interesting so far. It's nice to read something so much from Snape's POV too, even if I've no clue where its heading.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I believe that the next chapter will present the actual problem at hand :-)


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