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Reviews For The aftermath of resurrection.
Author's Response: Better late than never, I guess… because here is the update. Thanks for your review. I’m particularly glad that you picked up the potential in the story regarding the relationship between Dumbledore, Harry and Snape. I hope to be able to elaborate on that in the coming chapter(s). / Henna
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Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I had to write and tell you, I have greatly enjoyed reading your stories. Your characters possess such depth, and your scenes are intriguing and rich with detail. (I also worked in healthcare -in Mental Health - so I particularly enjoy that aspect in fiction when well written.) That you can write so beautifully in a second language is just amazing to me...in fact, most of your writing is far more precise than the work of many fiction writers for whom English is their native tongue! In truth, you hardly need any assistance: but it's a fact that every writer benefits from having their work proofread by someone with an outside perspective. Sometimes we become too close to our own work to effectively proof it ourselves. (I wouldn't dream of publishing anything without first having it proofread by my talented and endlessly patient editor, Kay!) If you are still seeking a Beta for your stories, I would consider it a privilege to assist you. I retired last year to care for my husband, who is partially disabled, so I have time on my hands and no pressing schedules to keep. (I may even FINALLY have time this year to finish one of my own, badly neglected stories!) I have some editing experience, and most of the time it would be no trouble to beta a chapter and return it to you fairly quickly. If you are interested, please feel free to contact me. You can find me listed on this site as Twinheart. Best of luck to you, and keep up the good work. I am so looking forward to your next chapter! Cheers! Twinheart Author's Response: Thank you, Twinheart, for the encouragement and for the offer to beta! I'm definitely interested and I sent you a message from your P&S page - did you get it? I also wish YOU all the luck, courage and tenacity to finish your stories. Yours, Henna.
Author's Response: :-) Indeed, it does.
The descriptions of the artist and the gallery meeting were great. I love that Snape can handle small talk now and that Harry can be into something so completely as painting. I wonder if Harry is bleeding painful magic into his paintings, and if that is the way it is healing him. Or if it's just a way for him to express himself and work through his emotions. I think it's wonderful for him to of picked up a painting hobby. Maybe he'll get really good and just be an artist as his occupation. Though I'm not sure who would appreciate the awfulness of the emotions he surely paints, I can't see it as a dining room attraction. :) I'm curious to find out! Thanks so much for the update! Author's Response: You’re right! What a horror to have a painting like that at one’s home! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had completely misunderstood the meaning of ”to blemish” - and was sure enough not to look it up, too! I must have seen it used that way somewhere else, so I’ll blame it on the fact that I read far too much fanfiction - apparently it’s not healthy for your vocabulary :-) Luckily there are people like you to rectify it! Bill’s appearance in Snape’s floo is not about Ron or Ginny, though… |
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