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Reviews For Fairytale Of Home
As ever a brilliant chapter lots of angst and confusion for poor Harry. I think that if he was in that state Ron or Neville may have gone to get McGonnagal Author's Response: I think so too! I had them not do it here because they would have witnesses him getting worse every time he spoke to her or Snape and generally avoid her as best he could. But I think I dropped the ball and did not properly set that up! Thank you so much for reviewing and your kind words! <3
One of favorite things on this chapter was Harry's reaction to Lupin as an teacher of dubious character. That just made me smile. Even after this chapter I still have a bit of an inkling that Lupin could be up to something, but I may be reading too much into it. I am so curious to see what will happen with Aofie, the painting and all of that. It feels like Snape is starting to express his care towards Harry differently and I wished we would have seen more of a gradual development there rather than out of the blue. I think Snape has always cared for Harry in his own way and has a hard time expressing his emotions, but the outward change seemed a bit abrupt. As far as the plot too I feel like all that tension and build up got a little deflated in the last chapters. These are only minor things though and I absolutely love your story. Thanks for sharing your time and talent!
Not so in your story. Harry has a lot of grievances and anger towards Snape. He did so much wrong towards harry on purpose. He was and is cruel and malicious. He took his time and thought about the best ways to hurt an innocent just to get back at a dead man. His chicken's are coming home to roost. I really hope we see some repentance and atonement from Snape. Not just a ceasing of his vitriol, but actual actions towards fixing what he broke. As a reader, I just can't summon up even a smidge of sympathy for Snape at this time. I have much contempt for him and am very interested to see if he can be redeemed. Can't wait to see where you take this character and story. I'm still insanely curious as to the results of the investigation. Will we get some details? As always, I love this story. It's one of my favorites. I offer my best wishes to you and your recovery. Being ill sucks balls when it goes on longer than a few days. Hang in there!
Author's Response: All will be resolved pretty soon there is only around 2 chapters left I believe. |
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