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Reviews For Fairytale Of Home
I am very curious about what happened to Severus. Did he go home to investigate? Did he have an allergic reaction to the veritaserum but took it anyway? Did someone tamper with it to cause him harm? And Lupin too..What is he doing there? Is it really him or someone under polyjuice? All these questions that are running through my mind. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Snape is back soon too so we can see how their rocky relationship develops. I liked that Harry felt somewhat comforted of Snape's gesture of putting a hand on his back. I think Harry is very deprived of physical affection. I also liked that Snape acted somewhat parental regardless of wether it was an act or not. Do something enough times and it becomes a habit. You do well at portraying McGonagall's less desirable attributes and it works well to have her somewhat antagonistic. I absolutely cannot wait to see what will happen next.
Though Minerva is jumping to conclusions before all the facts are in, I'm glad someone is looking out for Harry. She's correct to be suspicious of Severus but she's going about this all wrong. LOL, talk about burning bridges with both Severus and Harry. I think I said it before, but I honestly believe that if Harry told the truth, he wouldn't be believed. He already lied and adults always view children as liars anyway. Couple that with Severus's obvious animosity and disdain towards Harry as well as being him primary caregiver (at least on paper), is it any wonder that he's the main suspect? The adults are just going to have to figure this out on their own. Is that why Severus has been absent? It's a good thing that Severus is being asked to submit to questioning voluntarily. The school is taking Harry's abuse seriously and not hand waving it away. Poor Harry. His depression is so heartbreaking. What an awful start to a school experience that should be a positive right of passage. Hermione is still an annoying, arrogant borderline bully though. *sigh* forgive me. I just can't stand her personality or character. I just don't respond well to that - to put it nicely - bossy type of personality that expresses itself by making others feel inferior. She should learn how to be bossy by lifting people up, not showing them up. I'm glad that you included Harry's - most valid and accurate - opinion that the state of his relationship with Severus is Severus's fault entirely. He is cruel and depending on who's classifying it, abusive. Kids do try to be someone their adults can be proud of. They forgive and try and forgive and try over and over again before they finally give up. More than any adult would. I think I just about gagged when Severus claimed Harry as his 'son'. I felt like I needed to gargle with Listerine. Though I know why they were play acting, I just wanted Harry to negate that statement with his entire being. Severus doesn't deserve to claim Harry as his son. As always, I can't wait for more. My mind is going off on a dozen different speculative tangents, wondering what will happen next.
Author's Response: Yeah.. :/ She formed an opinion and ran with it
Author's Response: Can you eat again so soon? *starts cooking* |
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