Reviews For Fairytale Of Home
I definitely think this is Aofie's true colors. She is quite malicious and step above Snape for sure. It seemed like she was taking some of her resentment of Snape out on Harry. It's like down the food chain it goes. I wonder if she will try to do something to Lily and play innocent, or have Harry take the blame?
I also wonder who cut the painting? Maybe there's more to it.
And, wow, Harry and Snape's relationship seems to be going from bad to worse. I am quite curious to see what Harry will come up with to try to get expelled from Hogwarts. Although most of the blame is on Snape, and the comment of him almost killing his mother was out of line, Harry is quite defiant as well. I can see that Snape sometimes tries, and at times is concerned. They could benefit from some outside pressure brining them together and learn to rely on each other.
Great work, great job and I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Hi! Don't worry the story has not been abandoned! It shouldn't be too long now. I simply have five uni papers to write and I admit I feel guilty about neglecting the other regardless if I work on those or the fics. Damned if you do, damned if you don't I guess! :)
I think I would feel an immense sense of betrayal and anger towards Snape and Lily for not telling me my own story. Having to find out from strangers just a few weeks before school starts has got to hurt. He must feel so unimportant and neglected. And angry most likely.
I know I said last chapter that kids can more easily forget and forgive bad parents. They can actually create a better relationship if the parent decides to try. But damn...after this, I just don't know how that is possible. It just keeps getting worse and worse. He might even want to go to hogwarts now just to get away from them.
Vamos para adelante!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot! And I think your English is great but I'm not a native speaker either! :)
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