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Reviews For Old Magic
Title: Chapter 2 14 Sep 2019 9:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for continuing this story very good plot line and I love severus’s thoughts
Title: Chapter 5 13 Sep 2019 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Ms_Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    Wh-what? Why? What is... you can't leave it there, you can't! That's just cruel.. I mean, I had a feeling I knew what was going on, but then you just.. you open the damn door to hell and don't bother closing it behind you?

    I want to see justice after the heinous acts against Harry!

    What about closure? Please don't be so cruel... a story this good, as it's ramping up, you. Good lord my brain is fried, I'm speechless.

    It was an amazing story, I'm just almost literally devastated that it's over so soon.
Title: Old Magic 16 Sep 2017 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very good story
Title: Old Magic 14 Feb 2017 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting and imaginative thank you. The blindness of adults never ceases to dismay and you have brought this out so well.
Title: Old Magic 11 Feb 2017 5:47 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Too short, way too short...more please? This doesn't feel like a one shot, it feels like there needs to be more. It's so good, for all there are some errors here and there (you are human after all, and the errors were ones that would be missed by a simple spell/grammar checker). You had me on the edge of my seat the entire way...can you please do more? Kudos, though, if you don't, it's a truly great story. I give that full points.
Title: Old Magic 10 Feb 2017 5:25 pm
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this story a lot. Great job and very original. I especially liked how you portrayed Lupin and Harry's relationship here. I would love to see either a continuation of the story or I think it would do great if you decided to use what you have as a basic storyline and expand it to a multi chapter fic.
Title: Old Magic 08 Feb 2017 8:57 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting...especially tonk's and the willful blindness of virtually everyone.

    Ending is a bit abrupt though.

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