Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 6 10 Jun 2017 5:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Like this story but the slang that Severus is using grates a little. I think he would always speak in what is known as the "The Queen's English" in other words he would not say yeah or sure.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Apr 2017 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter
Title: Chapter 4 25 Apr 2017 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter but I find Severus' way of speaking a little too much of a child's way.
Title: Chapter 3 14 Apr 2017 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good humour thank you
Title: Chapter 2 14 Apr 2017 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 1 14 Apr 2017 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start thank you. I found a few sentences a little confusing.

    Author's Response: Please let me know which sentences have confused you.
Title: Chapter 3 14 Apr 2017 2:09 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Severus pays the Dursley's a little visit.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Feb 2017 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start
Title: Chapter 1 09 Feb 2017 8:17 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a bit surprised that Pomfrey was annoyed about Snape's comment on not knowing the potion. He is the expert and it she is unfamiliar with it, it makes sense that he be involved in Harry's treatment. Harry won't be happy about it though.

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