I don't really like James Potter or Sirius black in this one. Who was Harrys mother if Lily was a horse?
Oh.. such a enticing story.. Please, do write more when you have time.. Just finished Elsa2's story on fanfic.net: 'The Horse', and it is a classic. She also has been around many equines, and has a natural, humorous style of writing. You can almost feel the glossy coat and the warm hay scent while you read it and it is looong. Highly recommended.Perfect, when you miss having a horse yourself. Thank you for a promising start to your tale.
Very clever use of the characters. I hope it was meant to be amusing in places although you haven't flagged humour, as I thought it was great fun.
I am not a horse person so I did need the terms explained but I still thought it was a good story. I generally dislike non-magic AU's but you seem to be able to pull it off nicely, just like the rest of your works.
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