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Title: Thunder and Trust 16 Dec 2020 4:47 am
Reviewer: ryddance97 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, you really managed to capture the emotional aftermath of trauma - things like muddled thoughts, the detached feeling, forgetting what you're doing while in the middle of doing it, how reality just doesn't feel right, the bleak hopelessness, the fear.

    In short, you really capture the feel of the aftermath in a way that really envelops the reader. That was one of the things that really stood out to me in this chapter
Title: Thunder and Trust 08 Oct 2017 8:00 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Its my second time reading this story, I love it.
    How ironic, isn't it? Severus wanted Harry to learn Occlumency, badly. Somehow, god granted his wish, in a disturbing way. It just reinforces the fact about being careful what we wish for.
Title: Thunder and Trust 23 Jun 2017 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done a wonderful description of a panic attack thank you
Title: Thunder and Trust 18 Apr 2017 12:23 pm
Reviewer: Livia Ethelind (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I loved it, been gone for a while and this is a wonderful fix to return to begin reading! ^_^
Title: Thunder and Trust 14 Feb 2017 3:34 am
Reviewer: l0stinthesupermarket (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a chapter. I'm already fascinated by this story. Excited for what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm really happy you are enjoying the story so far. It won't be too long until I post chapter two. 

     Merope :)  

Title: Thunder and Trust 13 Feb 2017 2:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful writing thank you so much a brilliant start to the story can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I am thrilled you are enjoying the story so far. I'm currently writing chapter two, so it will not be long until I post it. 

     Merope :)  

Title: Thunder and Trust 13 Feb 2017 4:49 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    He's a good person to trust dear Harry.

    Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review! 

    Yes, Severus is definitely a good person to trust. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, it won't be long until I upload chapter two.

     Merope :)  

Title: Thunder and Trust 12 Feb 2017 6:17 am
Reviewer: kncrowder88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Noted a few mistakes, primarily missed letters in words. Enjoying this so far. Look forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for pointing out the missed letters in words thing. I did edit the chapter before posting it (using word) and there was nothing underlined, but I porbably just overlooked a few things. I'll be sure to correct the mistakes when I spot them and I'll be more careful with the next installment. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

    Many thanks again,

    Merope :)  

Title: Thunder and Trust 09 Feb 2017 8:43 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He has lost his godfather, been captured and tortured by Death Eaters and now has to stay with Snape. He really is having a rotten year. At least Severus seems to have made a start in helping Harry's mental state.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for taking the time to review--it means a lot. 

     Yeah, Harry isn't exactly having the time of his life and staying with Snape will definitely not be like staying with the Weasleys. But sometimes receiving help from someone you don't particularly like is not easy and I guess the same can be said of offering comfort to someone who you don't hold in high regard. Both Harry and Snape have a lot to learn from one another though. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story. 

     Merope :)  

Title: Thunder and Trust 09 Feb 2017 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story so far!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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