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Reviews For Carcass
In short, you really capture the feel of the aftermath in a way that really envelops the reader. That was one of the things that really stood out to me in this chapter
How ironic, isn't it? Severus wanted Harry to learn Occlumency, badly. Somehow, god granted his wish, in a disturbing way. It just reinforces the fact about being careful what we wish for.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm really happy you are enjoying the story so far. It won't be too long until I post chapter two. Merope :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I am thrilled you are enjoying the story so far. I'm currently writing chapter two, so it will not be long until I post it. Merope :)
Great job! Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Yes, Severus is definitely a good person to trust. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, it won't be long until I upload chapter two. Merope :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for pointing out the missed letters in words thing. I did edit the chapter before posting it (using word) and there was nothing underlined, but I porbably just overlooked a few things. I'll be sure to correct the mistakes when I spot them and I'll be more careful with the next installment. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Many thanks again, Merope :)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review--it means a lot. Yeah, Harry isn't exactly having the time of his life and staying with Snape will definitely not be like staying with the Weasleys. But sometimes receiving help from someone you don't particularly like is not easy and I guess the same can be said of offering comfort to someone who you don't hold in high regard. Both Harry and Snape have a lot to learn from one another though. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Merope :)
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