Wow, you really managed to capture the emotional aftermath of trauma - things like muddled thoughts, the detached feeling, forgetting what you're doing while in the middle of doing it, how reality just doesn't feel right, the bleak hopelessness, the fear.
In short, you really capture the feel of the aftermath in a way that really envelops the reader. That was one of the things that really stood out to me in this chapter
Wow! Sooooo good! This fic really pulls no punches, i love how deeply you delve into Harry's psyche. Snape is excellent in here. I haven't read many fics that focus on Lily from a different perspective, so well done. Great story, i love the ending!
Umm, oh. Err, isn't Harry acting like an idiot? Apologising for being homesick? Idiot, but I like him. *wink*
Will here be a sequel? What happened to Voldemort? It was a really nice story! Love you!
I have a feeling that Snape won't like what he finds there. By the look of Harry, first thing he would find would be a mass of swirling thoughts, emotions and memories.
I won't like to go in for a walk...........
Its my second time reading this story, I love it.
How ironic, isn't it? Severus wanted Harry to learn Occlumency, badly. Somehow, god granted his wish, in a disturbing way. It just reinforces the fact about being careful what we wish for.
Wait... *pant* wait just a... *wheeze* just a moment.... Good Lord, what a ride! What were you trying to do? What if I passed out half way?
On a serious note, this was amazing. I really like how you pointed out that Severus's insecurities were similar to Harry's. Poor babies.
Thank you for such a great read.
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