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Title: Prologue 31 Jul 2020 5:05 pm
Reviewer: talented2 (Signed) [Report This]
    Are there laws regulating handwriting in Wizarding Britain? Mabey you meant illegible?
    But otherwise I like this first chapter.
Title: Prologue 11 Aug 2017 12:18 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    love the first chapie: can't wait to see what next!!
Title: Prologue 04 Mar 2017 2:57 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story. I like that Snape picked up Harry, but that you still keep them both in character.

    Can't wait to see where you go with the rest of the story.

    Author's Response: Thank you for commenting.  I am very glad you are enjoying the story. 
Title: Prologue 15 Feb 2017 9:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent ending and good start to the story I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thank you so much

    Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, they are always appreciated. I'm glad yo hear you enjoyed the chapter. The next   one will be posted on Friday, so keep an eye put for it.
Title: Prologue 14 Feb 2017 4:04 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry has had an exciting day. He must feel elated after getting all those things - more than he has ever gotten at the Dursleys. Snape is still his snarky self but at least he is answering Harry's questions. His comment about the 'foolish boy' was an interesting twist.

    Author's Response: He did indeed have an exciting day.  I like snarky Severus and he wouldn't want Lily's son kept in the complete dark.  Half of the stupid things Harry does is because people don't tell him what's really going on.
Title: Prologue 10 Feb 2017 8:41 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Quite a nice retelling of Harry's first introduction to magic. I always like it when Snape is the one to collect Harry, but it was nice that you managed to introduce Hagrid too.
    There were a few places where the odd word, or part of word seemed to be missing (e.g.I'm guessing the last sentence should read 'There were still those loyal to him too')but the story was generally easy to follow.
    Snape didn't seem to dislike Harry, so I'm curious to see where things will go when they reach Hogwarts,

    Author's Response: Thank you for your comments.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I'm sorry for the mistakes and thank you for pointing out the errors.  I think I caught most of them now. I'll do better next time.  I hope they didn't scare you off from coming back and seeing the next chapter.
Title: Prologue 10 Feb 2017 5:30 pm
Reviewer: nnjjj (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited to see this. I love your other story What Makes a Family and your portrayal of Snape in it. I was hoping to see you post something again. I love the concept of this one and I can't wait to see where it goes. Great start!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the start of this story.  I loved writing "What Makes a Family".   I hadn't written anything for a couple of years and the one story I did in the fall was not Harry and Snape-centric, so I couldn't post it here.  

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