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Reviews For Seasons of Love
But otherwise I like this first chapter.
Can't wait to see where you go with the rest of the story. Author's Response: Thank you for commenting. I am very glad you are enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, they are always appreciated. I'm glad yo hear you enjoyed the chapter. The next one will be posted on Friday, so keep an eye put for it.
Author's Response: He did indeed have an exciting day. I like snarky Severus and he wouldn't want Lily's son kept in the complete dark. Half of the stupid things Harry does is because people don't tell him what's really going on.
There were a few places where the odd word, or part of word seemed to be missing (e.g.I'm guessing the last sentence should read 'There were still those loyal to him too')but the story was generally easy to follow. Snape didn't seem to dislike Harry, so I'm curious to see where things will go when they reach Hogwarts, Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm sorry for the mistakes and thank you for pointing out the errors. I think I caught most of them now. I'll do better next time. I hope they didn't scare you off from coming back and seeing the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the start of this story. I loved writing "What Makes a Family". I hadn't written anything for a couple of years and the one story I did in the fall was not Harry and Snape-centric, so I couldn't post it here. |
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