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Reviews For Seasons of Love
Love your twist on Canon. Great job. Author's Response: Well, Harry will be a lot harder to look after being so far away in the tower. Severus probably hoped that his influence would mean there was less one idiotic Gryffindor, but nope. Harry is too much his parents' son.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: The plan is to update once a week until the story is complete. I'm glad I was able to keep you interested in where Harry might end up. I hope you all enjoy the next chapter at much as you did this one.
as for more depth, the last paragraph. I think developing the emotions surrounding him would be better (he is eleven, eleven year olds perceive emotions around them very well)
Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see, but Severus will be Severus. The same goes for Harry and Ron. |
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