Hee hee. Poor Harry. lol He can't get away with a thing, even though he's not in Slytherin.
Loving this story. Great job.
Author's Response: No, he can't, not with Severus on the case. Thank you. It's always nice to hear people like what you've written.
| Title: Fall 1991
| 02 Mar 2017 7:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the interaction between Harry and Severus but would love to see a little more AU in the story. Thank you for updating
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment it made me go back and look at what I had done for the next chapter. Hopefully it's bit more to your liking.
Good chapter! I really like that Snape is taking a special interest and shows some responsibility for Harry even though he isn't in his house. Would love to see more Harry and Snape interaction. Good job and I'm excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I stepped it up in the next chapter. Hopefully, you like that one better. Thanks for the comments, it makes me want to do better. I made changes to the next chapter based on this and other comments.
This is where in kids minds their opinion of certain adults in solidified. Why didn't Neville get detention? Why is Harry the target for harassment and sabotage?
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