This was a beautiful and heart-rending chapter. Your characterization of Blaise and his inner world is phenomenal. I love the way that Severus is helping him.
Title: Short List
| 26 Aug 2018 6:36 pm
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Reviewer: Lola (Signed)
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I love your characterization of Snape and the way he tries to help Blaise (and Harry).
I continue to be impressed with your ability to completely pull your readers into the world you have created.
Thank you for sharing your talent 😊.
I think there's a mistake about DADA teacher, in LADTH Harry mentions a useless teacher imparting knowledge about hair products. Never does he mention Dumbledore substituting, and he would with his fear of the man.
Title: Short List
| 20 Mar 2017 10:07 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter. Poor Blaize you have really got under his skin, thank you so much.
So Blaise is on one of Snape's short lists. 😊 That would be a very scary idea except that Snape genuinely cares for Blaise for himself not just because he's Harry's friend. I guess Blaise is finding out first hand what Snape meant when he promised to keep an eye on him.
I'm glad that Harry and Blaise are getting their friendship back on track. Up until now, they both have been mistreated or neglected by the adults in their lives who should have been looking out for them. They need each other for support.
Thanks for updating.
I LOVE IT BUT I NEED MOREEEEE IVE RE-READ THESE 3 CHAPPIES LIKE 30 TIMES MAN UR WRITING GIVES ME LIFE
everything is beautiful and perfect and Blaise needs a good Weasley hug and I won't rest until it happens
Eagerly awaiting (checking this website hourly) an updated84;d84;
Title: Short List
| 13 Mar 2017 10:21 pm
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Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Beautiful, heartbreaking chapter. You have a incredible ability to draw readers into the inner worlds of your characters and paint a vivid, multi-faceted picture with your words. This chapter has exceeded my expectations, and those were very high expectations, I will say. I eagerly await an update.
I ADORED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH my heart is just BREAKING for both blaise and harry oh my god.... they just need THIRTY HOUR HUGS ASAP but snape is great with them. true mvp. these lines just broke my heart: "He was tempted, horribly, to beg. Don't leave. I'll be good. Please don't leave. But that was pathetic." oh jeez i can't even deal it's too good.
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