The lead up to Blaise’s emotional leak was beautifully and insightfully written. The interplay between him and Severus is masterfully done. Thanks for your amazing writing.
I hope the Weasleys can help Blaise relax a little, because I don’t think Blaise can go on like this for much longer.
Thank you for sharing another brilliant chapter!
I've read pretty much all of your stories several times over, but I think this one is my favorite! Thank you for the update - it was amazing!!
| Title: Tension
| 06 Apr 2017 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good as usual. Just wondering how Ron is feeling? He has issues with being the sixth son in the family and now another boy in the family to take away attention.
Blaise has a major melt down coming soon. The 2 small episodes with Theo and Severus have only taken the edge off temporarily. Having never known adults who want him for himself or who don't feel he is a burden, Blaise can be forgiven for trying to keep his feeling bottled up inside but it's only a matter of time before something happens and he is forced to let go.
So Blaise is going to be the "perfect child" for the Wesleys? Good Luck with that. In a household with all those people and siblings like the twins and Ron around, Blaise is going to get into trouble sooner rather than later. It will probably take Arthur and Molly treating Blaise like one of their own after a bone headed stunt and not just one time before Blaise understands not all adults are alike. I'm looking forward for the Fireworks to began and Blaise's healing to start.
Great chapter.
This is going to be a crazy hit story in the fanfic scene! I love Blaise :)
Wonderful chapter. I was waiting for Blaise to finally crack. The progression of his emotions was beautifully portrayed. Looking forward to more.
I loved it! I want Snape to adopt Blaise in the end. He is the perfect father for him:)
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