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Reviews For Geminus: Year One
Title: Lies Don't Become Us 20 Apr 2017 9:15 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice to see the boys bonding by teaching each other about the Muggle/wizarding worlds respectively.

    Author's Response: Thanks!!
Title: King's Cross 17 Apr 2017 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving although I hope they end up being friends with Hermione. I want them to be in the same house I hope they are. Thank you for your thoughtful story I love seeing Draco develop and change. I'm also hoping Severus will be at the sorting!

    Author's Response:

    Hermione isn't a main character in this fic, but if they're friends or not you'll have to wait and see. The sorting is next chapter, and Severus will certainly be there to see it.

    Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story and Draco's development! 

Title: King's Cross 16 Apr 2017 5:06 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, I really enjoyed the twins' first train ride. Draco's trying so hard to unlearn the misconceptions and prejudices grilled into him by the Malfoys - I'm so proud of him! And I like the idea of the twins and Ron and Neville all being friends.

    Oh, but I don't want them to be separated into different Houses! D: D: I mean, I suspect they will be, and I have every confidence that they will find a way to remain close regardless, but it will still make me a little sad. They just found each other, dagnabit!

    Wonderful chapter - I look forward to the next update!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot and has been helpful. It's also reassured me I'm doing some things right at least haha. Draco's got so much conflict going on, and it's why I chose to make him the main character POV as he does have quite a journey ahead of him. 

    I can't say anything about the sorting, spoilers and all that, but really enjoyed reading your thoughts on it. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far, and thanks again for the reviews - absolutely made my day! 

Title: Lies Don't Become Us 16 Apr 2017 4:42 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I love, love, love the sibling bonding. So good for the boys to get to know each other and realize that although some obvious things were different, their upbringings were (sadly) similar. I'm very happy Tonks is going to be there for them, too!

    Ah, Severus. I agree with Minerva - a little heavy on the dramatics there, Sev.

    Author's Response:

    Yay! I was actually surprised while planning this chapter that there were so many similarities, which worked really well for the characters so that was fun. Glad you're happy about Tonks :)

    Haha, yeah, Severus is doing a lot of sulking at the moment. He just found out he has not one, but two Potter brats coming to Hogwarts. Thanks for the review. 

Title: The Lost Boy 16 Apr 2017 4:25 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Draco D: All rained on and lost and miserable and then he has to meet Petunia and the rest of the Dursleys. Poor kid. I'm not sure how much comfort I can even take from the fact that at least Draco and Harry now have each other.

    Great start!

    Author's Response: That was a really rough day for him indeed. I had a little trouble writing it at first, poor Draco. But you're right, at least he's found Harry. Thank you for the review! :)
Title: King's Cross 16 Apr 2017 1:05 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Having Draco in the mix is adding an interesting factor. I never would have guessed that he would end up friends with Ron.

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!
Title: Lies Don't Become Us 13 Apr 2017 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter I like how you are developing the characters, thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you!! That's one of my key focuses with this series. 
Title: The Lost Boy 13 Apr 2017 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very dramatic a good start to the story thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Title: Lies Don't Become Us 12 Apr 2017 11:31 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    i bet Harry will end up in Hufflepuff.

    Author's Response: Thanks for sharing!
Title: Lies Don't Become Us 11 Apr 2017 2:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a bit surprised that Vernon is so blasé about having, not one, but two wizards in the house. He isn't even insisting that Draco do chores. At least the boys will be going to Hogwarts shortly. Looking forward to the sorting.

    Author's Response:

    He's biding his time for what happens in the next chapter ;) As for the chores, his logic is that it took years to teach Harry everything and he still "doesn't do it good enough" in Vernon's eyes, so it would just be a waste of effort and sanity to teach Draco when the boy is only in the house for 2 weeks. 

    Glad you're looking forward to it, though I'm nervous lol. Thanks for reviewing! 


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