This was intriguing, suspenseful, and simply beautiful. Thanks for your story.
Title: Chapter 6
| 20 Jun 2017 10:15 pm
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Title: Chapter 5
| 20 Jun 2017 10:06 pm
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Thank you a very Severus turn of events
Title: Chapter 4
| 20 Jun 2017 9:54 pm
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Very tense thank you they work well together as a team!
Title: Chapter 3
| 20 Jun 2017 9:40 pm
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Excellent riddle thank you
Title: Chapter 2
| 20 Jun 2017 9:32 pm
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Thank you a very emotional chapter
Title: Chapter 1
| 20 Jun 2017 8:46 pm
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Thank you, I like the idea of Harry running a commune
*crying* This was BEAUTIFUL!! Oh God, I don't even have words for it! Thank you, thank you, thank you for this lovely story! I swear you made my heart ache with Severus and Harry million times. I love happy endings!
I couldn't imagine them not hugging after having been so close and through so long a separation. At least after seeing him on the horse, Harry can believe that Sev will get better and not blame himself for the capture. You had a typo - "And then Harry would have to reign Penny in..." It should be rein. To rein in something actually comes from the riding term of reining in a horse or horses. Rein in and reign over. Hope you don't mind the correction - I worked for a newspaper too many years.
Draco as senior Auror - it's nice to see Slytherin caution and cunning rewarded. Poor Snape. The apparition must have been excrutiating.
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