Hm, that slap was the best, or worst part of the evening. Really? Severus, you need to control yourself, but then, Harry, that wasn't a very good thing to say, was it? I don't know what is wrong with Janet. Is there, or is Harry just threatened? The baby was the last straw, I admit, but then again, Severus did say that he had been neglecting Harry lately.
Your welcome.
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Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jun 2017 5:14 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story, only typo I could see was you wrote insurance and I think you meant reassurance, but not to worry it's very good thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for the review ;) I will fix the typo right away :)
It's OK. A good story is well with the wait.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and your patience though, you flatter me Lily ;)
I'll try to be patient.
Author's Response: I already did upload the next chapter Lily, and it's waiting for validation. Unfortunately, that one's out of my hand :(
The fault lies with all three of them They need to sit down and calmly talk about it.
Author's Response: It does. It's all a big misunderstanding. Wait for the next chapter ;)
Oh no! Poor Harry. Eager to read on soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review dear ;) I will update soon
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