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Title: Chapter 6 17 Oct 2017 12:19 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    For a terrifying moment, I too thought that you were gonna kill off Harry. Thank god that you chose not to.
    Oh, and you are doing it again. You are skipping over timelines, but I guess I am more or less on track now.
Title: Chapter 6 28 Jul 2017 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very powerful chapter thank you so much, can't believe Severus took the risk of introducing Lily's half sister to Harry

    Author's Response: thank you Fmh, as always your reviews give me the inspiration i need. can't wait to update for you guys ;)
Title: Chapter 6 26 Jul 2017 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I can tell that you put time into this. So good. So many cliff hangers haha

    Author's Response: I do. I really do. Sorry about the cliffhangers though, it's not on purpose ;) thanks for reviewing Lyza :)
Title: Chapter 6 26 Jul 2017 4:08 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry!!!! Noo!!!!

    Author's Response: My sentiments exactly ;)
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jul 2017 12:27 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    That chapter was a bit of a wild ride! Kill off Sirius and Remus if you're feeling like it, but please DON'T kill off Harry. He deserves a decent life with Severus and whoever-Janet-is. If he can get past the deception they do at least want him to be happy. I'd hate you to turn him into a lost cause.

    Author's Response: it's about to get wilder trust me ;) not sure if you would like Janet when the truth is revealed though, there is much more to it than a hidden identity. i would also hate myself if i killed Harry off though, maybe in another fic... thank you for reviewing rosina ;) and i actually agree with you, killing sirius and Remus sounds very tempting at the moment, killing Harry? not really, i think he needs and deserves a good long life with his family.
Title: Chapter 6 25 Jul 2017 6:37 am
Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed) [Report This]
    ...You... I can't believe...
    ...
    English has failed me.
    ... Wait no, got something...
    Do you enjoy ripping my heart from my chest, then telling me I have to wait to get it patched up? Because I feel this hole in my chest right now, and it's not filling.
    ...So this /half/-sister of Lily's... Was she or was she not Harry's mother/the one who abused him? I couldn't tell for sure. We now know that Severus know who she was. (Sev! What were you thinking!?)
    Urge! Sirius and Remus made me so mad! Can't they see that there is no perfect solution for Harry's special situation? There's no such thing as "perfect parenting". Besides, Harry chose Severus, not them!
    Please, please, please! Don't leave me in this dark hole of angst that you have push me into! Throw a rope, or at lease a flashlight!
    ...Ah, so English did come back to me...
    Thanks for another chapter! Hope to see another soon. (~.^)

    Author's Response: i know...i'm sorry! i'm an evil person, i know. but don't worry i write fast, i swear! it's the validation that prolongs the updates, not me. and as to your remedy i will actually answer that question, yes. though Janet was not the abuser she /deliberately/ did /something/ that hurt Harry in a way as you will read in the next chapter. i was mad too when i wrote the canines, in my opinion they just pretend that they know Harry, and have not suffered the things Severus went through. the evil parts wants to leave you in the angst though, but i'm winning over and already half through the next chapter, with validation taking like...three or four days you'd be getting your flashlight next week!! thanks for taking your time and reviewing Draco ;)

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