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Poor Harry. Poor poor Harry. Janet, I want to know Severus's reaction when Janet told them about how Lily was treating Harry.
Author's Response: i agree! i really am cruel to him, but don't worry, things will work out in the end! the plot will get clearer in the next upcoming chapters and i'm glad you find it entertaining (wink!) thank you Fmh ;)
Harry! Don't give up on us! Daddy has made mistakes, but he never meant to hurt you! Okay, I see the flaws in Severus' and Janet's "plan" to kept Harry in the dark, but I can't fully write them off, like Remus and Sirius have seemed to. And, yes, I still hate them. BUT, I'm finding some heart for Janet. Yes, she screwed up; yes, she seemed like she was ruining Harry's life; yes, I accused her of being Lily. But, hey, I DO believe in second chances. I can't believe the bomb you dropped about Harry's health. Okay, so maybe the whole "frozen, then fried" fiasco should have been a fair warning, but I never expected you to blow my hopes into smithereens! Another fantastic update! I'm at the edge of my seat for the next. Hey, next time you throw a flashlight… remember the batteries, too! (~.^) Author's Response: at least you didn't bawl like i did while writing it though, it was very emotional and draining for me. daddy did make some mistakes yes, and there is going to be a looooong way for them to fix it all, severus's and janet's half cooked plan to hide things from Harry deserves some credit cause it lasted about a whole year...but you're right, everyone deserves a second chance and i believe in redemption. i tried to make Harry's health as realistic as it got, but don't worry Harry is strong! and i'm about to send a whole package down there, so you should be good by yourself for a while ;) i'll update very soon.
Poor Harry! It all makes sense now. And even though it IS both Severus' and Janet's fault, you can't help but feel bad for severus. Author's Response: i do feel sorry for everyone in this fic, full of mistakes and imperfections... just the way it's supposed to be. thank you for the review ;) |
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