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Title: Chapter 12 17 Oct 2017 3:58 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Err, I know that Harry is a mentally disturbed child, but what is wrong with Sev touching Harry's pencils?
Title: Chapter 12 18 Sep 2017 8:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the interaction between them but spend a bit of time trying to sort out which scene we are in. Just a suggestion but could we have a break between the scenes to help us? Thank you for updating and I'm so glad you are feeling better

    Author's Response: thank you for the review and i did put up line breaks... don't worry i will fix them ( it must have been messed up in the editing or something), you won't have to sort the scenes out anymore though, this chapter was the last one with flashbacks ;) stay tuned and i will be back soon!
Title: Chapter 12 17 Sep 2017 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter reminded of a song from one of my favorite artists:
    It’s the hardest thing to give away,
    And the last thing on your mind today.
    It always goes to those who don’t deserve.
    It’s the opposite of how you feel,
    When they pain they caused is just too real.
    Takes everything you have to say the word,
    Forgiveness.
    --Forgiveness by Matthew West
    The song continues to, "The prisoner that it really frees is you." That, I think, really explains why Harry is relieved when he realizes he doesn't want to let his dad go. Whenever you give new insight on Harry and Severus' relationship, I'm always amazing at Severus' fully committed and entirely unconditional love. It warms my heart!
    Now, I guess I'll have to wait and see how he forgives Janet...
    James is such an arrogant little prick. The only thing he's interested in is power, never in Harry. Yet, it still feels like he's winning. Like Severus will lose Harry to him. I want to see Harry stand up to James, show him how he can use his power to defend himself like he couldn't as a kid.
    Brilliant chapter, truly! And my lightsaber has been proving to be bloody useful, though it's still hard to climb up, even with rumble under my feet. Can't wait for the next chapter! (~.^)

    Author's Response: i have listened to that song before, it's a personal favorite! that and the song 'mended' by the same artist. i feel like that song is what basically wrote start of time instead of me, give it a go! honestly, i couldn't keep Harry from Severus for long, /i/ was relieved when i wrote it, and it just felt right for Harry to forgive Severus then instead of waiting to hear the whole thing. it just felt right, even though Severus doesn't know it yet, and i like it too when each chapter reveals a new aspect into their lives and interactions, i like this gradual character build instead of cramming everything into one overwhelming chapter, i hope it's working!i'm afraid that your suspicions are correct, James will win and Harry will have encounters with the man and the rest of the Potter family... man i feel bad thrusting that on you like that...i hope the light saber and the cave would be intact the next time i send something down there! hang on ;)

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