PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE (x 150) FINISH THIS! IT IS AMAZING AND RIVETING AND TENSE AND ... UGH! I NEED MORE!
Author's Response: the new chapter's up, stay tuned ;)
I LOVE this story. It's one of those stories that makes me feel the mood of the character. I feel SO angry at Janet on Harry's behalf, and I want you to know that this story is really good, and you always know how to improve your work.
Author's Response: thanks to your awesome review, the story is back on track now... my mood for this story has been down for some time so thank you soooo much for giving me the inspiration i needed ;)
| Title: Chapter 17
| 04 Jan 2018 10:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written thank you. I'm not sue why James and Lily suddenly wanted Harry, is it revenge on Severus?
Author's Response: thanks and the back story is revealed in the last few chapters so you have every right be confused. stay tuned ;)
Oh, no...! Harry, stay awake!
Author's Response: will he though?
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Noo!!!! Harry!!!!
Author's Response: i know! i'm a horrible person!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 30 Nov 2017 9:29 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating. Severus will have to think fast to get them out of this hole.
Author's Response: thank you as always for reviewing ;)
Author's Response: thank you as always for reviewing ;)
I really hope Sirius' plan works....
Author's Response: me too... thanks for the review.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 06 Nov 2017 4:55 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Brilliant and very angsty thank you. I can't believe any justice system could work like that but as they put Sirius away without a trial I suppose I must!
You corrupt bastards!!!!
Author's Response: i know!!! stay tuned ;)
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