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Reviews For Start of time
Author's Response: Down the road to heal indeed Draco, get ready for the final climate ;)
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing and i love the canines too ;)stay tuned.
Author's Response: thank you!
Author's Response: thank you for the review and i did put up line breaks... don't worry i will fix them ( it must have been messed up in the editing or something), you won't have to sort the scenes out anymore though, this chapter was the last one with flashbacks ;) stay tuned and i will be back soon!
It’s the hardest thing to give away, And the last thing on your mind today. It always goes to those who don’t deserve. It’s the opposite of how you feel, When they pain they caused is just too real. Takes everything you have to say the word, Forgiveness. --Forgiveness by Matthew West The song continues to, "The prisoner that it really frees is you." That, I think, really explains why Harry is relieved when he realizes he doesn't want to let his dad go. Whenever you give new insight on Harry and Severus' relationship, I'm always amazing at Severus' fully committed and entirely unconditional love. It warms my heart! Now, I guess I'll have to wait and see how he forgives Janet... James is such an arrogant little prick. The only thing he's interested in is power, never in Harry. Yet, it still feels like he's winning. Like Severus will lose Harry to him. I want to see Harry stand up to James, show him how he can use his power to defend himself like he couldn't as a kid. Brilliant chapter, truly! And my lightsaber has been proving to be bloody useful, though it's still hard to climb up, even with rumble under my feet. Can't wait for the next chapter! (~.^) Author's Response: i have listened to that song before, it's a personal favorite! that and the song 'mended' by the same artist. i feel like that song is what basically wrote start of time instead of me, give it a go! honestly, i couldn't keep Harry from Severus for long, /i/ was relieved when i wrote it, and it just felt right for Harry to forgive Severus then instead of waiting to hear the whole thing. it just felt right, even though Severus doesn't know it yet, and i like it too when each chapter reveals a new aspect into their lives and interactions, i like this gradual character build instead of cramming everything into one overwhelming chapter, i hope it's working!i'm afraid that your suspicions are correct, James will win and Harry will have encounters with the man and the rest of the Potter family... man i feel bad thrusting that on you like that...i hope the light saber and the cave would be intact the next time i send something down there! hang on ;)
Author's Response: thank you for helping me gain my spirits back Fmh! i already blocked the person so i don't think it would be a problem, but i will do that if it continues...i am in awe too, we have such talented bunch here and i have loved them from the very beginning, gain i'm flattered that you think so, don't worry! i will continue on and try to toughen up and deal with pests! i love you too and please stay tuned!!
i hope you not end to write because of those person!! all my love to you!! :3 Author's Response: I'm very flattered that you said that luna! It's really heart warming to hear that you like my stories after something like that happened. Don't worry, I will finish all of them and maybe write more! Grazie mille per il vostro sostegno! ;)
Last chapter, I felt Harry was being utterly selfish, wallowing in his self-pity. Now that I look at it, it's only been 2 or 3 freaking days since the accident. What should I expect? I just really, /really/ hope Harry will prove to be the strong, amazing boy we all know him to be, and forgive Severus and Janet. As for this chapter... How could you leave me hanging like that!? Severus this-freaking-close to Harry, then you changed scenes on me! Oh, the suspense is killing me! Thank you for another chapter as well as the light saber. Worked beautifully, once I figured out how to turn the bloody thing on /without/ taking my own head off. Unfortunately, I did take out the wooden ladder you sent... (~.^) Author's Response: oh boy, i think i shouldn't have sent the light saber, are you sure you can work with it? i'll send a first aid just in case. Lucius is...Lucius. i think he's not afraid to call anyone on their crap and also he's a jerk, and a slytherin, i think his combination with the canines and Janet in a confined place would be hilarious, cool, and sorta heart warming? Harry is fourteen. when i was writing him i tried to channel my inner teenage self without being obnoxious or unrealistic, and considering it's only been like 3 days..? i guess the reactions were appropriate. but don't worry, Harry will be back to his wonderful charming self soon enough (hint next chapter,wink) quick question; have you tried light sabering your way out by carving into the cave? i think the blade is strong enough.... |
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