Oh these flashbacks are truly awful, the stuff of nightmares.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 14 Sep 2017 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written but hard to bear Harry's pain! Thank you
Well, I am reading this chapter again, I love this one, one of my favourites till now. I would be delighted to see all this from Severus' perspective, I want to hear what would he be thinking of Harry's constant screaming and begging. reading it the second time proved to be more gruesome than the first. The way you described Harry's bones snapping made my heart ache with pity. A really nice work. (This is my second review on this chapter, just tells how much I love this story.)
Eeesh! That was some chapter. I hope that Severus understands that Harry has gone into a flashback, will help him in feeling less disturbed. He could have stunned Harry before applying the potion. Well, you had already stated that you like tortured heroes in your bio, the are one of my favourites too, so this chapter was good (main reason I read this story). I guess you will slowly reveal some things that happened to Harry in his captivity, right? You see, small flashbacks, memories, nightmares etc.
The story is going pretty nice and the updates are fast, love it till now!
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