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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Centipedes! Urgh! I hate them, they make me shiver and want to vomit and gag. *Shudder*. I did not need the visuals........... Arrrrggghehheh!!!! I hate it! But you have already said that this is dark, maybe you can add gross to it too? At first I hadn't thought that Muggle torture could have been effective, after all, Wizards have the Cruciatus curse, though I don't really know how that feels (Not that I want to.) but reading what you have written, I ma eating up my words. Poor Harry, the trauma is so great, and written so beautifully. Keep writing, loving it! Centipedes......... *moans* |
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