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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Title: Chapter 11 22 Jan 2023 12:58 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m hanging onto the tender moments in between Harry’s gruesome flashbacks.
Title: Chapter 11 11 Oct 2017 6:53 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. A difficult chapter I'm sure to write but a lot of honesty between the two brings a lightness to it.
Title: Chapter 11 09 Oct 2017 9:47 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harumph! Thai had been a long and agonising week, but of well, at last the chapter is up, now you have also said that the chapters would be updated once a week, so I guess that is reasonable enough.
    Centipedes! Urgh! I hate them, they make me shiver and want to vomit and gag. *Shudder*. I did not need the visuals........... Arrrrggghehheh!!!! I hate it!
    But you have already said that this is dark, maybe you can add gross to it too?
    At first I hadn't thought that Muggle torture could have been effective, after all, Wizards have the Cruciatus curse, though I don't really know how that feels (Not that I want to.) but reading what you have written, I ma eating up my words.
    Poor Harry, the trauma is so great, and written so beautifully.
    Keep writing, loving it!
    Centipedes......... *moans*

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