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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Title: Chapter 15 22 Jan 2023 1:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for closing up the holes in the question about the wards and why Dobby can get through them. He could have rescued Harry right away, if Harry had thought of it…sigh.
Title: Chapter 15 14 Nov 2017 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. Good sense of claustrophobia they are feeling in this chapter
Title: Chapter 15 13 Nov 2017 11:40 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry seems so (pathetic) sad. I pity him very much, I don't know how Severus is getting annoyed at the boy. He was tortured for Merlin's Sake!
    Severus! You should be more considerate, its not about trust, the fact that he is not safe any where was TORTURED into him, of course it will take some time to sway him from that notion!
    Let him be, you are making him study for, what? 5 hours? I don't study for more than 3 hours a day! And, if I were in harry's place, I won't be able to function properly let alone study. I might already be dead by the rate we are going, Harry is quite strong if I must say. (suicide, life would be too difficult.)
    A lovely chapter, waiting for the next one.
    PS: Would Voldemort be defeated in this story? Or will there be another sequel?

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