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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Title: Chapter 27 25 Feb 2018 4:52 am
Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this chapter, been following this story since the first part of the series. Really well done, love how you have Severus and Harry still in character throughout the series. Update soon.
Title: Chapter 27 24 Feb 2018 1:56 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    (Reply to the review reply) No need to be sorry, just me being dumb, thanks for explaining though.

    Great chapter! Nice, the gift was awesome, all of them. Hermione and Ron can now communicate with Harry, that's so brilliant. Now, after this chapter, my already very big desire to skate has increased tenfold.
    Anyway, thanks for the update, nice chapter, loved it!
    Keep writing!
Title: Chapter 26 22 Feb 2018 3:19 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, this was sweet, I am guessing another dark chapter is coming....? Cuz nothing good lasts long for Harry, does it?
    Anyway, I am still waiting when that potion will come to use, the one whose purpose became crystal clear, you said that it is important, right?

    Author's Response: I'm sorry if it wasn't clear! The potion they made was to sedate the fairies so they could bring them back for the Christmas tree. It's also used to keep them calm and provide nutrition. Do I need to make that clearer in the story? I'm sorry you were still waiting for it.
Title: Chapter 26 20 Feb 2018 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Harry's 12 days of Christmas version very funny. A lovely fluffy chapter for us this time! Thank you for updating.
Title: Chapter 25 30 Jan 2018 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. I skipped a little of this chapter but found the last part lighter and healing.
Title: Chapter 25 27 Jan 2018 9:12 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WITH THE WEBSITE!!!!!! IT DIDN'T GIVE ME THE NOTIFICATION THAT THIS FIC HAS BEEN UPDATED!
    Well, thank god I checked the story today or I would have missed this wonderful update.
    Looks like my guess about those blue eyes was correct, wasn't it?
    I love dark chapters!
    And, I think, you should also confirm the fact that you are a writer and not a sadistic murderer, the way you describe the tortures.
Title: Chapter 24 19 Jan 2018 8:10 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for such a cuddly, fuzzy chapter! Your description of the fairy world was masterful and brought it alive thank you again
Title: Chapter 24 15 Jan 2018 8:36 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a sweet and happy chapter that I'm now worried that something Really Bad is about to ruin Christmas for the boys.
Title: Chapter 24 15 Jan 2018 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, this was so sweet, I believe that the story is progressing very slowly, its been weeks since Christmas and it isn't even Christmas eve here yet, still, I love the idea of fairies, you look like you do a lot of research..... Hm?
    Waiting and waiting! But I loved the part where the Dungeon's Bat becomes Snake Eye!
Title: Chapter 23 06 Jan 2018 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done, I'd forgotten about the mark so thanks for the reminder. No further forward on our mystery so waiting for the next chapter.

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